Magazine second drafts and updated pieces

On the left hand side of each set of images, are my second drafts of my music magazine and on the right are my updated pieces. 

I have now added images to all of the parts of my magazine, redesigned my formatting on my double page spread, in order to make the image captions look clearer and easier to read.

I have also added an image that I took of some graffiti, this adds another dimension of the contents page because it removes more dead space and adds another image to the page.

I also added my photos to the double page spread. I did not change the formatting of the page, because I was happy with how the layout looked and positioning of the images within the article.